C1 Advanced Syntax 15 min read 困难

缩短句子 (并列句中的省略)

掌握省略(Ellipsis),让你的英语表达告别啰嗦,直达 C1 级别的 natural fluencyconciseness

Grammar Rule in 30 Seconds

Drop repeated words in sentences joined by 'and', 'but', or 'or' to sound more natural and sophisticated.

  • Omit shared subjects: 'He came and [he] saw.'
  • Omit shared verbs (Gapping): 'I ate steak; he, fish.'
  • Keep auxiliaries for clarity: 'I haven't gone, but he has.'
[Clause A] + Conjunction + [Clause B - Redundant Parts]

Overview

### Overview
在英语的高级语法中,Ellipsis(省略)是一个非常关键的概念。简单来说,它指的是在协调从句(coordinated clauses)中,为了简洁和流畅,故意删掉那些即便不写出来,读者或听众也能从上下文中完全理解的词汇。对于我们中国学生来说,这其实是一个非常有意思的对比。中文本身就是一种高度依赖语境(context-dependent)的语言,我们经常说“我吃饭了,(我)去睡觉了”,括号里的“我”在中文里是完全可以省略的,因为主语在语境中非常明确。英语虽然在语法结构上比中文更严谨(比如它有严格的时态和人称一致性),但在处理并列句时,为了避免冗余,它也有一套非常成熟的“省略机制”。
对于C1水平的同学来说,掌握省略不仅是为了让句子变短,更是为了让你的表达听起来更像母语者(native-like)。如果你在写雅思作文或者在职场写邮件时,每一句都把主语、助动词重复一遍,文章会显得非常“笨重”且生硬。省略是语言经济性(linguistic economy)的体现,它能让你的句子更有节奏感。这与中文里的“省字”有异曲同工之妙,但英语的省略有着更严格的语法边界(parallelism),一旦越界,就会造成歧义。我们接下来的内容会深入探讨这些边界,帮助你精准地运用这一技巧。
### How This Grammar Works
英语中的省略遵循一个核心原则:Recoverability(可恢复性)。这意味着,任何被删掉的词,必须能够通过前文提到的成分无歧义地推导出来。如果删掉后,听者需要停下来思考“这个词到底指代谁”,那么这种省略就是失败的。
在中文语法中,我们有“主语省略”的习惯,比如“小明去超市,买了瓶奶茶,又买了份外卖。”这里的三个动作都是小明做的,中文里我们完全不需要重复主语。英语也是如此,这叫做Subject Ellipsis。但英语比中文多了一个挑战:Auxiliary Verb(助动词)的省略。比如 She is reading and (she is) writing. 在中文里我们没有助动词,所以我们感觉不到这种“双重省略”的复杂性。英语中,如果两个并列从句的时态、语态一致,我们不仅可以省略主语,还可以连同助动词一起省略,只保留动词的present participle(现在分词)或past participle(过去分词)。
这种结构上的对等,我们称之为Parallel Structure(平行结构)。如果你在第一个从句用了is V-ing,第二个从句也必须是V-ing形式,才能进行省略。如果时态变了,比如 She is reading and she wrote a book. 这里就不能省略she,因为时态不匹配(is vs wrote)。这就是英语语法中“严谨性”的体现,它不像中文那样可以通过时间状语(如“昨天”、“现在”)来自由调节,英语的省略必须建立在词法层面的完全对等之上。
### Formation Pattern
省略的形成模式主要取决于共享的成分(shared constituents)。以下是几种最常见的模式:
| 语法现象 | 英语结构 | 中文对应模式 |
| :--- | :--- | :--- |
| Subject Ellipsis | He ate and left. | 主语省略(他吃了就走了) |
| Auxiliary Ellipsis | He is cooking and eating. | 助动词/谓语省略(他在做饭和吃饭) |
| VP Ellipsis | I like tea, and she does too. | 动词短语省略(我喜欢奶茶,她也是) |
1. 主语省略 (Gapping): 只要主语相同,后面的主语即可省略。例如:The students finished the project and submitted it on time.
2. 助动词与动词省略: 当时态一致时,可以连同助动词一起删除。例如:They have visited Paris and have seen the Eiffel Tower. -> They have visited Paris and seen the Eiffel Tower.
3. 动词短语替代: 当动作完全重复时,使用do/does/did来代替整个动词短语。例如:He works hard, and I do too.
### When To Use It
省略的使用场景非常广泛,但主要为了达到以下目的:
  1. 1简洁化(Conciseness): 在微信沟通或职场邮件中,效率至关重要。例如:I will review the report and (I will) send you feedback by 5 PM. 这样写显得非常职业且干练。
  2. 2节奏感(Rhythm): 避免重复能让句子读起来更有逻辑,尤其是长句。比如:The company expanded its market, increased its profit, and improved its efficiency. 这里的the companyits在省略后,动词的排列形成了一种排比的气势。
  3. 3学术书写(Academic Writing): 在学术论文中,为了追求严谨和紧凑,省略是必须掌握的技能。例如:The data were collected and analyzed using SPSS. 这里的the data were在第二个分句中被隐含省略了,这是非常标准的学术表达。
### Common Mistakes
作为母语为中文的学习者,我们容易犯以下错误:
  1. 1主语不一致时强行省略: 例如 *The cat ran away and the dog barked. 有些同学会写成 *The cat ran away and barked. 这是错的,因为动作发出者不同。中文里我们有时会模糊处理,但在英语中,这会导致严重的逻辑混乱。
  2. 2时态不一致引起的错误: 例如 *He is studying and he studied hard. 错误地省略为 *He is studying and studied hard. 这是因为中文没有动词变位,我们对isstudied的形态差异不敏感,但在英语里,这种混合时态的省略是不合语法的。
  3. 3代词指代不明: 有时省略后,读者无法确定动作的承受者。例如 *He took the book and put on the table. 这里的put后面缺了宾语,虽然中文里我们可以说“拿了书并放(在)桌上”,但在英语中,如果put的对象不明确,必须补回it
### Contrast With Similar Patterns
| 比较项 | 省略 (Ellipsis) | 替代 (Substitution) |
| :--- | :--- | :--- |
| 核心逻辑 | 直接删掉词汇 | 用词(如one, so, do)代替 |
| 适用性 | 必须成分完全对等 | 允许部分变化 |
| 例子 | He likes tea and coffee. | I like this tea, but I want another one. |
### Quick FAQ
  1. 1问:省略后是不是一定要加连词?
答:是的,通常需要and, but, or等协调连词。省略是发生在协调结构中的,不能随意删掉句子里的词。
  1. 1问:在口语中,我可以省略得更多吗?
答:可以,比如 Got it! (I have got it),但这是非正式的reduction,不是我们讨论的语法层面的ellipsis,在正式写作中要慎用。
  1. 1问:如果句子很长,省略会造成困惑吗?
答:如果句子结构过于复杂(比如包含多个从句嵌套),建议不要使用省略,以清晰为第一原则。

Types of Coordinate Ellipsis

Type What is Omitted Example (Full) Example (Elliptical)
Subject Ellipsis
The Subject
I went and I saw.
I went and saw.
Gapping
The Verb
I like tea and he likes coffee.
I like tea and he, coffee.
Auxiliary Ellipsis
The Helping Verb
He can sing and he can dance.
He can sing and dance.
VP Ellipsis
The Verb Phrase
I haven't gone but he has gone.
I haven't gone but he has.
Stripping
Everything but one part
He likes cake and he likes pie too.
He likes cake, and pie too.

Meanings

The omission of words from a sentence that are unnecessary because they have already been mentioned in a previous coordinated clause.

1

Subject Ellipsis

Removing the subject in the second clause when it is the same as the first.

“He opened the door and walked in.”

“They can stay here or go home.”

2

Gapping

Removing the verb in the second clause, often replaced by a comma in formal writing.

“My sister lives in London; my brother, in Paris.”

“The first team wore blue; the second, red.”

3

Verb Phrase Ellipsis

Omitting the main verb but retaining the auxiliary verb.

“I haven't finished yet, but John has.”

“Will you help me? I already am.”

Reference Table

Reference table for 缩短句子 (并列句中的省略)
省略类型 原句 (重复) 省略后 (地道) 为什么可行
主语 & 助动词
She is singing, and she is dancing.
She is singing and dancing.
共享主语 'She' 和助动词 'is'。
主语 & 实义动词
He eats breakfast, and he eats lunch.
He eats breakfast and lunch.
共享主语 'He' 和动词 'eats'。
主语 & 谓语短语
They will study, and they will pass the exam.
They will study and pass the exam.
共享主语 'They' 和情态动词 'will'。
实义动词 (Gapping)
I like coffee, and she likes tea.
I like coffee, and she tea.
动词 'likes' 被隐含,上下文清晰。
完整谓语 (非正式)
Did you finish the report? Yes, I did.
Did you finish the report? Yes, I did.
谓语 'finish the report' 完全被隐含。
正式写作
The data was analyzed, and the results were presented.
The data was analyzed and the results presented.
助动词 'was/were' 在 'presented' 前被隐含。

正式程度

正式
I am consuming a sandwich; he, an apple.

I am consuming a sandwich; he, an apple. (lunchtime)

中性
I'm having a sandwich and he's having an apple.

I'm having a sandwich and he's having an apple. (lunchtime)

非正式
I'm having a sandwich and he's having one too.

I'm having a sandwich and he's having one too. (lunchtime)

俚语
Sandwich for me, apple for him.

Sandwich for me, apple for him. (lunchtime)

并列句省略:核心概念

并列句省略

省略什么

  • 主语 Shared 'He' or 'She'
  • 助动词 Shared 'is', 'will', 'have'
  • 实义动词 Shared 'likes', 'eats'
  • 谓语部分 Shared 'to do', 'was done'

何时使用

  • 保持清晰 No ambiguity after omission
  • 特定连词 'and', 'but', 'or' are typical
  • 自然流利 Avoids choppiness & repetition

何时禁用

  • 主语改变 'I went, but he stayed'
  • 动词形式改变 'She has seen, but she will see'
  • 产生歧义 'He saw the dog and barked' (who barked?)

好处

  • 简洁性 Shorter, more impactful sentences
  • 流利度 Smoother speech and writing
  • 地道感 Sounds more like a native speaker

省略对比:啰嗦 vs. 地道

原句 (重复)
She is studying, and she is working. 重复的主语和动词。
They ran fast, and they won. 主动语态中重复的主语。
I like coffee, and I like tea. 重复的主语和实义动词。
The report was written, and the report was submitted. 被动语态中重复的主语和助动词。
省略后 (地道)
She is studying and working. 更流利自然。
They ran fast and won. 精简,避免冗余。
I like coffee and tea. 直接高效。
The report was written and submitted. 专业,保持清晰。

省略决策流程图

1

是否有 and, but 或 or 连接的两个分句?

YES
进入第 2 步
NO
此处不适用省略。
2

两个分句的主语相同吗?

YES
进入第 3 步
NO
保留两个主语 (如 'I went, but he stayed')。
3

实义动词或助动词相同,或被明确隐含吗?

YES
进入第 4 步
NO
保留两个动词 (如 'She has seen, but she will see')。
4

省略重复元素会产生歧义吗?

YES
不要省略;为了清晰请保留单词。
NO
可以省略!删掉重复元素以达到简洁。

省略实战:现代场景

💬

短信/聊天

  • Ran late, will be there soon.
  • Got it, thanks!
  • Heading out, be there in 5.
📱

社交媒体

  • Coffee run and then work!
  • New post up, go check it out!
  • Loving this weather, and this view!
💼

职场 (邮件/会议)

  • Reviewed the report and approved the changes.
  • Will analyze the data and present findings.
  • Prepared for the meeting and confident in outcome.
🗣️

日常对话

  • I'll have a coffee and a croissant.
  • He spoke quickly and clearly.
  • She went home and relaxed.

按水平分级的例句

1

I like apples and oranges.

2

She is tall and thin.

3

He can sing and dance.

4

Do you want tea or coffee?

1

He went home and slept.

2

I am tired but happy.

3

They didn't see the car or the bus.

4

She can speak English but not French.

1

I've finished my homework, but Sarah hasn't.

2

He said he would help, and he did.

3

You should call him or I will.

4

She was working in the garden and singing.

1

We can and must improve our results.

2

He enjoys hiking, and his wife does too.

3

I didn't expect to win, but I have.

4

The report was long, but the presentation short.

1

The first chapter covers theory; the second, practice.

2

Some prefer the city; others, the countryside.

3

He has never been, and likely never will be, a leader.

4

She was awarded a gold medal, and her brother a silver.

1

The CEO resigned, and the CFO likewise.

2

To some, he was a hero; to others, a villain.

3

I haven't yet spoken to him, nor do I intend to.

4

The data suggests one thing; the anecdotal evidence, quite another.

容易混淆

Shortening Sentences (Ellipsis in Coordinated Clauses) 对比 Substitution with 'One'

Learners often don't know whether to leave a gap or use 'one'.

Shortening Sentences (Ellipsis in Coordinated Clauses) 对比 Situational Ellipsis

Learners use informal situational drops in formal writing.

常见错误

I like tea and I like coffee.

I like tea and coffee.

Repeating 'I like' is unnecessary and sounds like a beginner.

He is tall and he is nice.

He is tall and nice.

The subject 'he' and verb 'is' are redundant.

Do you want milk or do you want sugar?

Do you want milk or sugar?

Shortening makes the question more natural.

She can sing and she can dance.

She can sing and dance.

Shared auxiliaries should be dropped.

I went to the park and I saw a dog.

I went to the park and saw a dog.

Dropping the second 'I' is standard.

They didn't call and they didn't write.

They didn't call or write.

In negative lists, use 'or' and drop the repeated auxiliary.

He is a doctor and she is a doctor.

They are both doctors.

Ellipsis isn't always the best; sometimes restructuring is better.

I have seen the film but he hasn't seen.

I have seen the film but he hasn't.

In VP ellipsis, stop after the auxiliary.

She likes swimming and to run.

She likes swimming and running.

Parallelism error: the forms must match before you can elide.

He said he would come but he didn't come.

He said he would come but he didn't.

Avoid repeating the main verb.

He has never and will never smoke.

He has never smoked and will never smoke.

You cannot elide 'smoked' because 'will' requires 'smoke'. The forms are different.

The first group was successful, the second failed.

The first group was successful; the second, a failure.

Gapping requires a semicolon and often a comma for clarity.

I like her more than you.

I like her more than you do.

Ambiguous ellipsis: does it mean 'more than I like you' or 'more than you like her'?

We have and are still developing the software.

We have developed and are still developing the software.

Morphological mismatch: 'have' needs 'developed', 'are' needs 'developing'.

句型

I have ___ and always will ___.

The first ___ was ___; the second, ___.

She doesn't ___ but her sister ___.

Real World Usage

Texting constant

At the gym. Coming?

Academic Essays common

The results were significant; the implications, profound.

Recipes very common

Wash the vegetables and [then] [wash] the fruit.

News Headlines very common

Police arrive, [police] arrest suspect.

Job Interviews common

I have managed teams and [I have] delivered projects on time.

Ordering Food constant

I'll have the burger and [I'll have] a coke.

💡

寻找冗余词

在 'and', 'but' 或 'or' 连接的句子中,找找有没有长得一模一样的词。如果它们功能相同,那就是省略的最佳候选:
I need eggs, milk and bread.
⚠️

别为了省事丢了逻辑

删减后一定要检查有没有歧义。如果听的人会搞混谁在做动作,那就老老实实留着:
He saw the dog and barked.
🎯

模仿母语人士

多听播客或看剧,留意母语人士如何在聊天中“偷懒”。模仿这些模式能让你听起来更地道:
Did you finish? Yes, I did.
🌍

场合很重要

发短信或闲聊时可以大胆省略,但在严谨的学术写作中要稍微克制,确保表达精准:
The data was analyzed and results presented.

Smart Tips

Check if the main verb form is the same for both. If one needs '-ing' and the other needs '-ed', you cannot elide.

I have and am still working on it. I have worked and am still working on it.

Drop the subject after the first 'and' to sound more like a native speaker.

I got up, I had breakfast, and I went to work. I got up, had breakfast, and went to work.

Use gapping with a semicolon to show off your advanced punctuation skills.

Mary likes to swim and John likes to run. Mary likes to swim; John, to run.

Use VP ellipsis (just the auxiliary) instead of repeating the whole verb.

Do you like it? Yes, I like it. Do you like it? Yes, I do.

发音

I like tea [pause] and he, coffee.

The Ellipsis Pause

In gapping, a slight pause often occurs where the verb was omitted.

I haven't seen it, but he HAS.

Auxiliary Stress

In VP ellipsis, the auxiliary verb is often stressed.

Rising-Falling in Gapping

I like TEA (rise); he, COFFEE (fall).

Conveys contrast between two items.

记住它

记忆技巧

If the word is the same, don't say the name.

视觉联想

Imagine a sentence as a train. If two cars are carrying the exact same cargo, you can unhook the second car and just let the first one do the work.

Rhyme

When 'and' or 'but' connect the two, the second subject is not for you.

Story

A minimalist architect named Eli (Ellipsis) builds houses. Instead of building two identical kitchens in a duplex, he builds one big shared kitchen in the middle to save space and make the design look cleaner.

Word Web

OmissionRedundancyParallelismGappingCohesionIdentityConjunction

挑战

Look at the last three emails you sent. Find one sentence where you repeated a subject or verb and rewrite it using ellipsis.

文化笔记

British speakers often use 'do' after a modal verb in ellipsis, whereas Americans do not.

Gapping is highly prized in academic writing as it demonstrates 'syntactic density' and sophistication.

Ellipsis is taken to the extreme in texting, often removing all function words.

From the Greek 'elleipsis', meaning 'a falling short' or 'omission'.

对话开场白

Some people love working from home; others, the office. Which are you?

I've never been to Asia, but my brother has. How about you?

Do you prefer tea or coffee in the morning?

I can't stand loud music, but my neighbors can. Do you have noisy neighbors?

日记主题

Compare two cities you have visited using gapping at least three times.
Write about your morning routine using subject ellipsis to link your actions.
Discuss a disagreement you had where one person liked something and the other didn't.

常见错误

Incorrect

正确


Incorrect

正确


Incorrect

正确


Incorrect

正确

Test Yourself

哪句话使用了正确的省略方式? 多项选择

选择正确的句子:

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: She likes to read and write.
主语 'she' 和动词短语 'likes to' 对两个动作都是通用的,因此在第二个分句中省略它们最简洁。
找出并修正句子中的错误。 Error Correction

Find and fix the mistake:

I went to the store, and he bought some milk.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: I went to the store, and he bought some milk.
原句是正确的。因为主语('I' 和 'he')不同,所以不能省略主语或动词。
将单词排序,组成一个自然的省略句。 Sentence Reorder

Arrange the words in the correct order:

All words placed

Click words above to build the sentence

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: The team analyzed the data and proposed a solution.
主语 'the team' 同时执行了 'analyzed' 和 'proposed' 两个动作,所以第二个动作前可以省略主语。

Score: /3

练习题

8 exercises
Correct the following sentence: 'He has never and will never tell a lie.' Error Correction

Find and fix the mistake:

He has never and will never tell a lie.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: He has never told and will never tell a lie.
'Has' requires the past participle 'told', while 'will' requires the base form 'tell'. You cannot elide 'told'.
Which sentence uses gapping correctly? 多项选择

Choose the most formal and correct version.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: I like apples; he, oranges.
In formal gapping, a semicolon separates the clauses and a comma marks the omitted verb.
Complete the sentence with the correct auxiliary.

I haven't seen the movie yet, but my sister ___.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: has
The auxiliary must match the subject 'sister' (3rd person singular).
Shorten this sentence: 'She bought a book and she bought a pen.' Sentence Transformation

She bought a book and she bought a pen.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: She bought a book and a pen.
The subject and verb are identical and can be removed.
Match the full sentence to its elliptical counterpart. Match Pairs

1. I can go and I will go. 2. I like tea and he likes tea. 3. He is tall and he is thin.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: 1-I can and will go
These are standard reductions.
Identify the ambiguous sentence. 多项选择

Which sentence could have two meanings?

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: John likes pizza more than Mary.
It could mean 'John likes pizza more than he likes Mary' or 'John likes pizza more than Mary likes pizza'.
Complete the stripping structure.

He loves to travel, and ___.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: his wife does too
Stripping or VP ellipsis works here to avoid repetition.
Correct: 'The first car was red, the second blue.' Error Correction

Find and fix the mistake:

The first car was red, the second blue.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: The first car was red; the second, blue.
Formal gapping requires the semicolon/comma structure.

Score: /8

Practice Bank

11 exercises
选择正确的动词形式完成省略句。 填空

She enjoys painting and ___ music.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: listening
哪句话正确使用了省略来达到简洁的效果? 多项选择

哪句话最地道?

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: He went to the cinema and ate popcorn.
匹配原句部分与其正确的省略形式。 Match Pairs

将原句与其对应的省略形式连线。

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: matched
找出并修正省略使用中的错误(如果有)。 Error Correction

The book was interesting, but I didn't finish.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: The book was interesting, but I didn't finish it.
翻译成英文,并在适当的地方使用省略。 翻译

翻译成英文:'她买了咖啡,然后很快喝掉了。'

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: ["She bought coffee and drank it quickly.","She bought coffee and quickly drank it."]
应用省略规则,选择最自然的选项完成句子。 填空

We plan to visit Rome and ___ the Vatican.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: visit
重新排列单词,组成一个正确且自然的省略句。 Sentence Reorder

排列单词:

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: The system was tested and deployed successfully.
识别并修正与省略相关的语法错误。 Error Correction

I am working on my project, and my friend playing games.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: I am working on my project, and my friend is playing games.
选择展示了高级且正确省略用法的句子。 多项选择

哪句话的省略是正确的?

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: Having prepared the documents, he then presented them to the board.
填空完成这个自然的省略句。 填空

He ordered a pizza, and she ___ pasta.

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: ordered
翻译成英文,尽可能使用省略使句子简洁。 翻译

翻译成英文:'你可以选择跟我们走,或者留在这里。'

✓ Correct! ✗ Not quite. Correct answer: ["You can either come with us, or stay here."]

Score: /11

常见问题 (8)

Generally, no. Coordinate ellipsis is for 'and', 'but', and 'or'. Subordinate clauses (because, although) require different types of reduction, like participle clauses.

In informal writing, no. In formal writing, it is highly recommended to help the reader parse the sentence.

Ellipsis is a grammatical omission where the missing words are 'recoverable' from the context. A fragment is just an incomplete sentence that often lacks a clear referent.

Yes! 'I washed [the car] and waxed the car' becomes 'I washed and waxed the car.'

Because 'has' requires 'gone' (past participle) and 'will' requires 'go' (base form). You can't elide words that aren't identical.

It is the standard. Repeating every word makes you sound like a robot or a very early-stage learner.

Yes, especially subject ellipsis ('I managed the team and increased sales'). It sounds confident and concise.

It's a type of ellipsis where everything is gone except for one constituent, usually with 'too' or 'as well'. Example: 'I'll have coffee, and a donut too.'

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Mastery Progress

Needs Practice

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Mastered

In Other Languages

Spanish high

Elipsis

Spanish is a 'pro-drop' language; English is not.

German moderate

Koordinationsellipse

Word order constraints in German are stricter.

Japanese low

Zero Anaphora

Japanese ellipsis is context-driven, not just coordination-driven.

French high

L'ellipse

French often repeats prepositions (à, de) where English would elide them.

Arabic moderate

Al-hadhf (الحذف)

Ellipsis in Arabic is often used for poetic emphasis.

Chinese moderate

Sheng lue (省略)

Chinese elides based on the 'topic', not just the 'subject'.

Learning Path

Prerequisites

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